Written feedback examples

Here are some good examples of written feedback students have received in different courses participating in the Reader Project.

Written responses might be composed directly as an e-mail or done in Word’s “Insert Comment” feature. Each example below contains excerpts from a longer response.

  • Feedback on a scientist profile  intended for a broad readership of nonexperts with an interest in the sciences
  • Feedback on a policy memo  intended for those making or exectuting national security policy
  • Feedback on a research proposal intended for social science researchers

Some readers have given their feedback as a recorded audio response.  To hear examples, click here.